Hello!
How are you? Today I will show you the 4th writing assignment (作文4).
You have already done the first part of your writing - selecting one (1) of the pieces of music to write about. Now here is what you do:
If you have written it in your notebooks - please type it up (with correct formatting!)
If you have already typed it up - look it over and check to see if you have correct formatting!
Now here is the next step:
1. Review all the paragraphs you wrote about each piece of music you listened to. Now do a comparison and contrast (比較対照) with two (2) of the pieces of music, in 1-2 paragraphs.
Begin with a topic sentence.
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting.
2. From here, compare (比べる) and contrast (対照する) what you thought of the two pieces of music with however and whereas. Write a little about the feeling or image you got from them. You can use things from what you wrote about them before.
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting. Both of these pieces had something unique. (入ってに比べ) The first one had a very moving feeling, and I had the idea that something sad had happened. I saw a older man walking slowly, along a path in a park, and he was thinking about his past life but feeling strongly that he did not have a future. (…)
(入ってに対照し) However, the fourth piece of music was very different. It was like a carnival or circus, where there were many things happening all at once. (…)
3. Now finish your writing with a concluding sentence (終わり文書).
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting. Both of these pieces had something unique. The first one had a very moving feeling, and I had the idea that something sad had happened. I saw a older man walking slowly, along a path in a park, and he was thinking about his past life but feeling strongly that he did not have a future. (…)
However, the fourth piece of music was very different. It was like a carnival or circus, where there were many things happening all at once. (…)
(入ってに終わり部分) I liked the first one. However, I liked the fourth one more because it was…, whereas the first one was…
Do this on a separate page, then print out. Now you have finished the 4th writing assignment!
Good luck! See you next week!
You have already done the first part of your writing - selecting one (1) of the pieces of music to write about. Now here is what you do:
If you have written it in your notebooks - please type it up (with correct formatting!)
If you have already typed it up - look it over and check to see if you have correct formatting!
Now here is the next step:
1. Review all the paragraphs you wrote about each piece of music you listened to. Now do a comparison and contrast (比較対照) with two (2) of the pieces of music, in 1-2 paragraphs.
Begin with a topic sentence.
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting.
2. From here, compare (比べる) and contrast (対照する) what you thought of the two pieces of music with however and whereas. Write a little about the feeling or image you got from them. You can use things from what you wrote about them before.
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting. Both of these pieces had something unique. (入ってに比べ) The first one had a very moving feeling, and I had the idea that something sad had happened. I saw a older man walking slowly, along a path in a park, and he was thinking about his past life but feeling strongly that he did not have a future. (…)
(入ってに対照し) However, the fourth piece of music was very different. It was like a carnival or circus, where there were many things happening all at once. (…)
3. Now finish your writing with a concluding sentence (終わり文書).
例えば：
Of all the different pieces of music, I thought the first and fourth ones were the most interesting. Both of these pieces had something unique. The first one had a very moving feeling, and I had the idea that something sad had happened. I saw a older man walking slowly, along a path in a park, and he was thinking about his past life but feeling strongly that he did not have a future. (…)
However, the fourth piece of music was very different. It was like a carnival or circus, where there were many things happening all at once. (…)
(入ってに終わり部分) I liked the first one. However, I liked the fourth one more because it was…, whereas the first one was…
Do this on a separate page, then print out. Now you have finished the 4th writing assignment!
Good luck! See you next week!
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