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Monday, July 1, 2019

東京理科大学 Writing & Composition 1a: Spring final writing assignment・前学期末作文

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How are you? Here is our spring final writing assignment (中間「前学期」作文). 

Themes
You have a choice between two (2) different themes:

・Writing about works of art

・Writing about a problem or controversy in an area of science or technology 

About the first choice:

For this topic, you can look in the Listening & Speaking textbook about some different works of art - or search out some works of art on your own on the internet. I could 
also select some works of art to post on this blog as well. 

You can write about one (1) work of art, or for an extra challenge, choose two (2) works of art and compare and contrast (比較対照して) them. If you choose this challenge, look for these points in your comparison and contrast:


Dynamics of artistic composition (美学、美術の構成) - (for example, color, space, relationships 

of people and/or objects to each other)

Possible story or scenario that the work of art shows or gives ideas about (for example, 

mood, feelings of people, conditions of objects or the place where the people and/or objects 
are) 

Finally, choose the work of art you prefer (好むand show what you believe to be a short story 

or scenario that comes to your mind when you see or think about this artwork.

About the second choice: 

For this topic, think about some problem or controversy (問題、議論in an area of 
science or technology – for example, a problem with a drug or medication in research, 
or a technological application. Here are some examples of such problems

The false data in the research of Haruko Obokata and the trouble in her research institute 


The use – and misuse – of private data by social media companies such as Facebook


The ways in which social media has spread fake news and other false information


The relationship between humans and artificial intelligence (AI) and possible problems

You are not limited to these examples of problems and issues, but these are some good examples.

Special note: 
For both of these different choices, I will gather your writing on this topic into a collection called The Little Book of Big Things -  a book about student writers’ feelings, opinions, issues and perceptions (認識) about different topics. 

How much to write 
I would like you to write 4-5 paragraphs – but if you can go longer that would be great! I would like you to write as much as you can, because your work may be published (出版した) on this blog and in The Little Book of Big Things collection. 

As I have said before, anything shorter than three (3) paragraphs will not be acceptable. Please remember that our time is tight - so you might not have the time to re-write

I will review as much of your work as I can on July 15th (7/15). I may ask you to re-write, or re-work your content, if I see that you are behind or if you need more advice or suggestions from me about the assignment. 


Please do not write line-by-line sentences. Remember that you are writing paragraphs (段落), not lists of sentences. On 7/15, I will ask you to re-write if I see that you are only writing lists of sentences about your topic. 


I will review with you guidelines in class on about Word formatting for your final drafts.

Deadline (締め切り
There will be two (2) deadlines this time - you can choose which one you would like to try for: An earlier one on July 22nd (7/22), and a final one on July 29th (7/29). 

Now - if you believe you can completely finish by 7/22, you can turn it in early - but I will review it firstIf I see that it needs more workI will ask you to work on it more and turn it in on 7/29


If you feel you need more time and have to turn it in on 7/29, that is okay - you will not be late


On either day - 7/22 or 7/29 - you will hand infinal version (完成版). You should select your theme and topic in it that you are interested in, and begin writing from now – do not wait


Now - here are the board notes for our class on 7/1:




Good luck! I will look forward to reading your great writing – and please relax over the summer for a job well done!

Image: Personal photograph. All rights reserved.

Sunday, July 1, 2018

東京理科大学 A英3 Spring mid-term writing assignment supporting post on art・前学期 「中間」作文美術比較対照の付記

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How are you? Here is a supporting post for those of you who are interested in writing a comparison-contrast with works of art.  

Task
Here are four (4) examples of works of art. Choose two (2) of them and write a comparison and contrast about them. Include these points

Dynamics of artistic composition (美学、美術の構成) - (for example, color, space, relationships of people and/or objects to each other)

Possible story or scenario that the work of art shows or gives ideas about (for example, mood, feelings of people, conditions of objects, or the place where the people and/or objects are)

Finally, choose the work of art you prefer (好む) and show what you believe to be a short story or scenario that comes to your mind when you see or think about this artwork.

Okay! Let's begin! 


Edgar Degas, Dancers

Kitagawa Utamaro, Three Beauties of the Present Day

Masanobu Okamura, Shibai Ukie

Edvard Munch, The Dance of Life

See you next time!


Images: Top - By C2RMF: Galerie de tableaux en très haute définition: image page - Cropped and re-levelled from File:Mona Lisa, by Leonardo da Vinci, from C2RMF.jpg. Originally C2RMF: Galerie de tableaux en très haute définition: image page, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=15442524/Dancers - by Edgar Degas - the-athenaeum.org [1], Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=5744729/Shibai Ukie - by http://homepage2.nifty.com/tisiruinoe/%89%9C%91%BA%90%AD%90M%8Es%91%BA%8D%C0%83J%83%89%81%5B.gif, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=4668661/The Dance of Life - by Edvard Munch - http://samling.nasjonalmuseet.no/no/object/NG.M.00941 Nasjonalmuseet/Høstland, Børre, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=37709496
All rights reserved on all reproductions of the images. I do not own the rights to these images or reproductions. All images uploaded for classroom purposes only.

Sunday, June 24, 2018

東京理科大学 A英3: Writing assignment 3 (The Small Book of Big People・The Stories of Science)・作文3

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How are you? Today I will show you our 3rd writing assignment (作文3) - comparing and contrasting (比較対照している) different important people, discoveries, or inventions in science and technology

As an example - look at the picture above. It is Pierre and Marie Curie, the famous husband-and-wife physicist and chemist. Both of them won Nobel Prizes, with Marie Curie winning two prizes - one in physics and another in chemistry. 


She is the only woman to ever win two Nobel prizes, and the only person to ever win in two different sciences. Is it possible that she might have achieved more than her husband? Or is it possible that her husband might still have been greater, because he made it possible for her to do research at a time when it was very difficult for women to work in the sciences? What do you think? 


While I have already given you the handout about the assignment, I will post it here as well as another way to help remind you about it, and what you can do for it.


Task
You have a choice between two (2) different topics. Choose one (1) of these:

1. Compare and contrast (比較対照して) two (2) different important people in science or technology to each other. Compare the two people you admire and respect, and who are important to you and how you think about science and are interested in it. But which person do you think might have had the overall greater impact? Think about this and make this the basis of your comparison and contrast.


I will gather your writing on this topic into The Small Book of Big People book I have talked about before in class.

2. Compare and contrast two (2) different important related scientific or technological discoveries or inventions in their impact to each other. Compare two important discoveries or inventions in science or technology within the same or similar field, especially those that may have gotten you interested in science and technology. Which discovery or invention do you think might have had the overall greater impact? Think about this and make this the basis of your comparison and contrast.



I will gather your writing on this topic into another book called The Stories of Science.

How much to write
I would like you to write as much as you can, because your work may be published
(出版した) on both this blog and in The Small Book of Big People and Stories of Science books. 

I would like to see maybe 3-4 paragraphs' worth of writing - the more, the better. You can write more than this if you can - and I encourage you to do so!

Deadline (締め切り)
It will be at the beginning of the class on July 9th (7/9), so I want you to bring in a first draft (下書き) on that day in your notebooks in pencil. I will then show some more guidelines in class with language and other points of comparison and contrast, changing things about the draft as you need to, then write to the finish and turn in your work on 7/9. 

Good luck with this! I hope you can have fun with this, and enjoy writing comparisons and contrasts about people, discoveries, or inventions in science and technology. 

See you next time!


Image: By Unknown - hp.ujf.cas.cz (uploader=--Kuebi 18:28, 10 April 2007 (UTC)), Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=20426111

Monday, June 11, 2018

東京理科大学 A英3: Comparison & contrast with music・音楽の比較対照

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How are you? As I mentioned in our class today for your quick homework, here is something short you can do outside of class.

Homework
You will see here four short music files. Listen to each one - listen to them more than once, even as many times as you want or need.

You do not have to write a lot about them! You also do not have to know anything about the artists, or the musical genres. My guess is that you will have never heard any of this music before, or never have heard of any of these artists.

All you have to do is to listen to each piece of music, and make a short note about which one you liked the best, and why. That's all!

Let's begin! Here's the first file:


Here's the 2nd file:


Here's the 3rd file:


Here's the last file: 


I hope you enjoy this activity as homework. Take care!


Image: By NorCal Bosie - Own work, Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=3433053
Video files uploaded from YouTube. I do not own the rights to the compositions or the files. All rights reserved to the copyright holders. Uploaded for classroom purposes only.

Sunday, January 14, 2018

東京理科大学 A英3: Final writing assignment support post (Part 2)・期末作文のサポート (Part 2)

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How are you? Here is a second supporting post for any of you who are interested in doing a comparison and contrast (比較対照) about famous scientists for your final writing assignment project.  

Look at the picture at the top. I believe everybody recognizes him - Albert Einstein, and the famous picture of him sticking his tongue out to the photographer! But everyone also knows him to be the foremost theoretical physicist of the 20th century, whose discoveries are still the basis for modern physics.


Task preparation

Any of you who are interested in writing a comparison and contrast about famous scientists are free to choose any two scientists you know of for your project. But if you can't think of who to write about, here are four ideas for you that you can use if you like. 

Choose two (2) of these famous scientists and compare and contrast their achievements. Follow these steps when writing about them:


First, show who they are (or were), and where they did their most famous work or research


Next, show what their most famous achievements were - inventions, discoveries, medicines, and so on - and what impact these things had. Show details of things such as chemical properties, patents, developments of vaccines, or anything else that you can find out quickly. 


Finally, show which of their achievements you believe might have been the greater by comparison, and that you believe had the overall greater impact


Here are some scientists you can choose from if you need to: 



Thomas Edison

Yoshiro Nakamatsu

Jokichi Takamine

Kikunae Ikeda

I hope these can give you ideas if you need them - or help you think of your own famous scientists to profile and compare and contrast in their impact. 


Good luck! I'll look forward to reading your great writing on this theme. 


See you next week!



Images: Top (Albert Einstein) - Fair use, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?curid=8970653/
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