Hello!
How are you? Today let's talk more about storytelling! Below is the picture of the story you wrote about:
Now here is your story. It was great! Short and to the point, but with local color to it.
This is a hotel at the small town in Germany. There is a restaurant on the first floor, and this is one of the famous restaurants that it is serving good food. Here is normally calm and relaxed place. Many local people often gather in here, and they are talking about their family, pets or something. Sometimes sightseer come here on their vacation, and they are enjoy lazy time, delicious cuisine, and some nice wheat beer. I would like to visit here!
Now here is another story, written by another student. Let's read it. What do you think of it?
I think this place was the USA, but a bad thing happened in there. This building was the most famous hotel in the USA. A lot of people stayed here and enjoyed many activities around there but this hotel became a target of terrorists!! One day bombing happened at there!!
Why was the crime found? Since, a girl saw one of them set bomb. She told it to her mother and she told it to hotelman. He called police man during terrorists had a dinner. Police man checked it was bomb. They checked the surveillance camera but did not be careful around them so they were caught.
What do you think of this one?
See you next time!
Now here is your story. It was great! Short and to the point, but with local color to it.
This is a hotel at the small town in Germany. There is a restaurant on the first floor, and this is one of the famous restaurants that it is serving good food. Here is normally calm and relaxed place. Many local people often gather in here, and they are talking about their family, pets or something. Sometimes sightseer come here on their vacation, and they are enjoy lazy time, delicious cuisine, and some nice wheat beer. I would like to visit here!
Now here is another story, written by another student. Let's read it. What do you think of it?
I think this place was the USA, but a bad thing happened in there. This building was the most famous hotel in the USA. A lot of people stayed here and enjoyed many activities around there but this hotel became a target of terrorists!! One day bombing happened at there!!
It was the fine daytime of one day. Five men checked in this hotel. They looked kind, strong and around 30. They opened their trunks in their room. You think there were some goods to stay, but some bombs in there!! They took a walk inside of the hotel till the time of dinner. However, in fact, they went to set bombs. These were time bombs so they set time after they leave there.
Next day, they prepared to leave there. The interphone of the room rang before 30 minutes they left. One of them opened the door, there was a police man. He said that I arrest you. They arrested after all.
Why was the crime found? Since, a girl saw one of them set bomb. She told it to her mother and she told it to hotelman. He called police man during terrorists had a dinner. Police man checked it was bomb. They checked the surveillance camera but did not be careful around them so they were caught.
What do you think of this one?
See you next time!
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